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SAT / 060609 / 7:08pm
Oh my gosh, so many natural highs today. I loved it<3
Anyway, I'd love to share another poem I presented in class this week.
It's based off the poem, "Never Offer Your Heart To Someone Who Eats Hearts"
This is mine, tell me what you guys think! =]

Never Offer Yourself to Someone Who Clearly Knows Nothing About You
By: Shaneen

Never offer yourself
to someone who clearly knows nothing about you
who finds manipulation
but just enough who controls you
in every direction
and power-stricken
metal fists
like a dictator.

Never offer yourself
to a curious stranger
Your mind, body, raw
soul inquired
he will scrutinize your hopes
with a magnifying glass
and setting it on fire
fueling it from top to bottom
with his hand
like an ant.

If you discover yourself
In an unknown area
With a person
Who clearly knows nothing about you
these things
you must do:

Inform him, but
avoid vulnerability
Allow him – thereafter
he observes your strengths –
finds your weaknesses
nearly a victor
Refrain from failure
to prevent his satisfaction
discourage the passion
in your dreams.

Walk forth the long path
where greater opportunities
anticipate you
on the staggering asphalt –
long having cultivated the nature
of controlling individuality
with You
and Only You.

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